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		<id>http://backup.witchspacewiki.org/index.php?title=Talk:Finis&amp;diff=61033&amp;oldid=prev</id>
		<title>Reval at 19:13, 27 December 2020</title>
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		<updated>2020-12-27T19:13:57Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #222; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;← Older revision&lt;/td&gt;
				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #222; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;Revision as of 19:13, 27 December 2020&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
  &lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Thanks for the heads up! It's the only one I've not read (rather disenchanted by Finis).&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
  &lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
  &lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Thanks for the heads up! It's the only one I've not read (rather disenchanted by Finis).&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td style=&quot;color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;: Agreed on that. Personally, I think it was a mistake to incorporate all those usernames from the BB as characters. Like setting a sledgehammer to the Fourth Wall and really yanking the reader out of the fantasy. For an author of Wagar's undoubted gifts, it surely wouldn't have been too much of a chore to invent new ones. And Altera would sit much better as a brief Epilogue to Finis. [[User:Reval|Reval]] ([[User talk:Reval|talk]]) 18:58, 27 December 2020 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td style=&quot;color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;: Agreed on that. Personally, I think it was a mistake to incorporate all those usernames from the BB as characters. Like setting a sledgehammer to the Fourth Wall and really yanking the reader out of the fantasy. For an author of Wagar's undoubted gifts, it surely wouldn't have been too much of a chore to invent new ones&lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt; (I mean 'Daddyhoggy' for a birdoid... come ''on''!)&lt;/ins&gt;. And Altera would sit much better as a brief Epilogue to Finis. [[User:Reval|Reval]] ([[User talk:Reval|talk]]) 18:58, 27 December 2020 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
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		<author><name>Reval</name></author>
		
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		<id>http://backup.witchspacewiki.org/index.php?title=Talk:Finis&amp;diff=61032&amp;oldid=prev</id>
		<title>Reval: comment on comment</title>
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		<updated>2020-12-27T18:58:56Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;comment on comment&lt;/p&gt;
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				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #222; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;Revision as of 18:58, 27 December 2020&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
  &lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
  &lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Thanks for the heads up! It's the only one I've not read (rather disenchanted by Finis).&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
  &lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
  &lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Thanks for the heads up! It's the only one I've not read (rather disenchanted by Finis).&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-empty&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td style=&quot;color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-empty&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td style=&quot;color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;: Agreed on that. Personally, I think it was a mistake to incorporate all those usernames from the BB as characters. Like setting a sledgehammer to the Fourth Wall and really yanking the reader out of the fantasy. For an author of Wagar's undoubted gifts, it surely wouldn't have been too much of a chore to invent new ones. And Altera would sit much better as a brief Epilogue to Finis. [[User:Reval|Reval]] ([[User talk:Reval|talk]]) 18:58, 27 December 2020 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
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		<author><name>Reval</name></author>
		
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		<title>Cholmondely: Retort!</title>
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		<updated>2020-12-27T15:18:13Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Retort!&lt;/p&gt;
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				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #222; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;Revision as of 15:18, 27 December 2020&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
  &lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Just an observation (in general about Wagar's 'tetralogy'), I believe it may be a little misleading to group Altera - a rather short short story - in with his novels/novellas. I was certainly a tad disconcerted and frankly disappointed by its all-too-brief content after following the download link from the Wiki. [[User:Reval|Reval]] ([[User talk:Reval|talk]]) 11:07, 27 December 2020 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
  &lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/td&gt;
  &lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Just an observation (in general about Wagar's 'tetralogy'), I believe it may be a little misleading to group Altera - a rather short short story - in with his novels/novellas. I was certainly a tad disconcerted and frankly disappointed by its all-too-brief content after following the download link from the Wiki. [[User:Reval|Reval]] ([[User talk:Reval|talk]]) 11:07, 27 December 2020 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
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  &lt;td style=&quot;color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Thanks for the heads up! It's the only one I've not read (rather disenchanted by Finis).&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
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		<id>http://backup.witchspacewiki.org/index.php?title=Talk:Finis&amp;diff=61004&amp;oldid=prev</id>
		<title>Reval: Created page with &quot;Just an observation (in general about Wagar's 'tetralogy'), I believe it may be a little misleading to group Altera - a rather short short story - in with his novels/novellas....&quot;</title>
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		<updated>2020-12-27T11:07:04Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;quot;Just an observation (in general about Wagar&amp;#039;s &amp;#039;tetralogy&amp;#039;), I believe it may be a little misleading to group Altera - a rather short short story - in with his novels/novellas....&amp;quot;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;Just an observation (in general about Wagar's 'tetralogy'), I believe it may be a little misleading to group Altera - a rather short short story - in with his novels/novellas. I was certainly a tad disconcerted and frankly disappointed by its all-too-brief content after following the download link from the Wiki. [[User:Reval|Reval]] ([[User talk:Reval|talk]]) 11:07, 27 December 2020 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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