Monitor 2 - Revision history

Pagroove: /* Old Ships 2010 Version */

2013-03-05T16:22:40Z

‎Old Ships 2010 Version

2012-07-02T08:31:59Z

Removed "." from the baseprice

2012-07-01T15:26:28Z

2012-04-27T21:58:24Z

Grammar.

2011-05-16T12:11:11Z

corrected base price

2011-02-11T17:42:36Z

‎Overview

2011-02-11T17:42:01Z

‎Overview

2010-05-27T07:54:18Z

marked as stub, more info needed.

2010-05-24T00:21:07Z

updated stats

2010-05-24T00:04:09Z

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 == Old Ships 2010 Version ==
-Monitor Industries sold the Monitor Trademark in 3114 after Zorgon Petterson Group was not interested any more in selling the Monitor 1. After some cutting into the Monitor program they where able to sell a lot of them until in 3115 a new version was on the drawing board.
+Monitor Industries bought the Monitor Trademark in 3114 after Zorgon Petterson Group was not interested in selling the Monitor 1 anymore. After some cutting into the ZPG Monitor program they where able to sell a lot of them until in 3115 a new version was on the drawing board.
 The Monitor 2 is an upgrade in almost every aspect from the Monitor 1. It has better pitch, roll and it has even decent speed for a trader. The Monitor 2 was launched as a poor trader's Python although the commanders that fly it are absolutely in love with the redesign.

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 |isoxp  = OXP
 |isplayer = Yes
-|baseprice = 23.000 Cr
+|baseprice = 23000 Cr
 }}
 == Overview ==

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-{{Infobox  ShipStats Oolite| title=Monitor 2
+{{Semantic Infobox  ShipStats Oolite| title=Monitor 2
 |image = [[Image:Monitor2.png|250px]]
 |dimensions =  50 x 40 x 100
 |capacity = 75 TC
 |capacityext = N/A

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 }}
 == Overview ==
-Oldships 2010 exclusive upgraded version from the Monitor 1
+Oldships 2010 exclusive upgraded version from the Monitor 1.
 == Old Ships 2010 Version ==
-Monitor Industries sold the Monitor Trademark in 3114 after Zorgon Petterson Group was not interested anymore in selling the Monitor 1. After some cutting into the Monitor program they where able to sell a lot of them until in 3115 a new version was on the drawing board.
+Monitor Industries sold the Monitor Trademark in 3114 after Zorgon Petterson Group was not interested any more in selling the Monitor 1. After some cutting into the Monitor program they where able to sell a lot of them until in 3115 a new version was on the drawing board.
-The Monitor 2 is an upgrade in almost every aspect from the Monitor 1. It has better pitch, roll. It has even decent speed for a trader. The Monitor 2 was launched as a 'poor mans' Phyton although the commanders that fly it are absolutely in lover with the redesign.
+The Monitor 2 is an upgrade in almost every aspect from the Monitor 1. It has better pitch, roll and it has even decent speed for a trader. The Monitor 2 was launched as a poor trader's Python although the commanders that fly it are absolutely in love with the redesign.
 == Link ==

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 |isoxp  = OXP
 |isplayer = Yes
-|baseprice = 340000 Cr
+|baseprice = 23.000 Cr
 }}
 == Overview ==

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 This ship is based on the [[Monitor_(Oolite)|Monitor]] from EliteA. It is slightly faster and has improved pitch and roll characteristics.
 == Link ==
 The ship is found in the [[Old_Ships_2010|Old Ships 2010 OXP]] by P.A.Groove.

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 |dimensions =  50 x 40 x 100
 |capacity = 75 TC
 |maxspeed =  0.21 LM
 |maneuverability = Roll: 1.4<br />Pitch: 0.6<br />
 |energybanks =  6
 |shieldboost = Yes
 |hyperspace =  Yes
 |isoxp  = OXP
 |isplayer = Yes
 }}
 == Overview ==